Crouched on old wooden steps
Between rusting iron bridgework
So cold she can barely breathe
Yet occasionally clouds of hopeless dreams
Kiss the air
Then fall and shatter at her feet
Toes almost as numb as her heart
Which even she isn't sure is beating anymore
And as the sun falls off the horizon
A lonley grey lies over the earth
Holding little promise for tomorrow
The breeze burns into her skin and she smiles
As she remembers how your hands once did the same
No one notices she's gone
And she likes it
In a strange way having no one who cares
Makes pulling the pieces apart so much easier
Than having to be watched
But maybe she's just selfconscious
Comfortable in her surroundings
Absorbing everything like it's the first time
There's a sparkle in her eyes
Everything is so much more beautiful....
When it's the end of the world















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"There is something in each of us that wants us to be Unhappy. It creates in our imaginations problems that don't yet exist- quite often causing them to come true."
~Benjamin Hoff The Te of Piglet
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"There is something in each of us that wants us to be Unhappy. It creates in our imaginations problems that don't yet exist- quite often causing them to come true."
~Benjamin Hoff The Te of Piglet
makes me ache inside to read..
so sad, so lonely......so easy to relate to
i love the italisized lines..
and it all flows so well, so easy.. to read so easy
everything is so much more beautiful..
when the world is ending
i love this piece so much..
its so apathetic feeling, with so much emotion
such delicate words
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Like a little child I'm captivated...and I can't turn myself away
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"There exist only three beings worthy of respect: the priest, the soldier, the poet. To know, to kill, to create."
Charles Baudelaire (1821 - 1867), Mon Coeur Mis a Nu, XXII
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